Chapter updates

The chapter Gifts from the Dead looks like a keeper.  Adding those 3000 words pretty much blew out all the other savings I had made, but I still have nine chapters to edit and still finding things to cut.  Here are the results of chapters 19 and 20.   Not counting Gifts from the Dead, I’ve cut about 6% of the original word count, which I’m very pleased with.

Chap Original Count Final Count Cut
19 3744 3588 156
20 1524 1291 233


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